My heart jumps at the thought of seeing you
And that moment never disappoints me
No not once, not even once
Slowly I want to go through your mind like you do mine
And in your embrace where I can be found, I am whole if only for a moment
I am found with you by my side
The Clock is ticking, my heart is beating and my mind is racing after you
It's not my choice; it's not your call
It's hard to get over something you never knew you were under
But I'm under your influence every time I take in what you say
My apologies, I just can't seem to find a way to get over you, so I won't
Where we stand and when we fall
What do we do after it all?
I've spent so much time trying to figure out each moment
Taking apart your every action, but still I get no satisfaction
At this point it's useless to even try to understand where time goes when I'm with you
With each minute I've loved you more
Your every second I live for
Could I have your attention for just a second more?
With your eyes on me I have something to live for
I hear it in your voice when you say my name
And in your presence my existence is sustained
Nothing comes after you and the things that you do
I can't remember what life was like before you














Devious Comments
I sooOOo know how the first half of paragraph one feels like (or it could be the only thing that I thought could relate).
You feel like a kid again, in every innocent essence of the moment.
I'm wistful on the second half of the first paragraph. I don't have a good look on who I am so I've never had a sense of fulfillment or that feeling of completeness. Which sucks, lol >_<.
I'm confused about the second paragraph. It's not the words that throw me, it's the experience of it. I wonder and think about it. The event and the hereafter. Which means I understand the paragraph but...at the same time, I don't understand it. (Um, do you get it? @_@)
Erhh, :_: *fanning face* the third paragraph really hit the nail on the heart. Major trip down memory lane. It's like a combo of feelings I got from the 1st and 2nd paragraphs with a uber punch. The extra hit being the words that match exactly what I long for.
Whaa! I think from my point of view, I took everything outta perspective from what you originally meant! @_@! Should I still post this?!?!
...Might as well..
I'm glad that you view things differently,
otherwise things would be boring and predictable.
Our experiences are different, so what we take from this poem or anything will always be somewhat different.
1st paragraph:
is about expectations and wanting to be connected to on some level.
2nd paragraph:
is me in a nutshell, which is why you might not get it.
I have this habit of not knowing just how deep I am into someone. I can't choose when, where or how I fall for someone. I don't know how they think of me or if what I'm thinking of them is even true or right.
All of this leads me to believe that I wouldn't be thinking and feeling this hard if they weren't important to me.
3rd paragraph:
is simply about feeling as though you need someone's attention in order to feel like you're worth something and thanking them for any time that they've spent with you.
Heck even now after reading this again, my perspective is beginning to shift and change a little. *Scratches head*
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"I'm more honest with my mouth closed..."
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